User talk:Makes2well

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Hello, and welcome to the wiki! We appreciate the changes you've been making, but please remember to make use of the show preview button to avoid saving numerous revisions of the same page minutes apart. —Vini (t|c) 03:54, 19 February 2014 (UTC)

Game Mechanics (recent changes)

I think that the "grammar" edits you recently made to the Game Mechanics page deserve another look. I'm sure you had good intentions when making the edits, and some of them were okay, but in other cases, they seemed to worsen the grammar or remove relevant information.

In particular, the beginning of the Currency section no longer makes sense, and your attempt at simplifying the Drop Rate section made it less factually correct. Those are probably the most significant issues, but I'd actually suggest that some of the other edits be reverted as well. Hopefully someone with more credentials weighs in on this, because it doesn't seem appropriate to just revert the page myself, since I didn't have a hand in writing the original version. Cadex (talk) 10:48, 19 February 2014 (UTC)

Hey, I updated those two sections and left your other edits intact. I tried to just reword or expand on the existing text. I also undid a few of your minor grammar changes that I believed to be incorrect. I should point out that your changes to comma usage within quotation marks would be appropriate for quoted speech, but not when they are being used to denote an expression or figure of speech. Leave me a message if you'd like to discuss.Cadex (talk) 04:57, 20 February 2014 (UTC)